Seems pretty good.
A solid effort. animation is pretty good. Smooth at least. Interesting settings and decent music choice. However. The voice acting killed it for me. Please get a better mic and actual voice actors to do the characters voices. I'm not trying to be offensive here cause I'm sure you worked hard on this, but the voice acting quality currently in this animation makes me want to cry. If you can't find anyone to voice act (which you can, its not that hard, I myself can do voice acting) just run over the lines a few times and try and say them naturally as though you were the person in the animation, don't try to be that character just be that character. Again, not trying to be offensive, just trying to help.
(Kami the Avatar)
This is what I'm talking about. That nice hand drawn feel, smooth animations, very interesting story line with nearly endless possibilities. The song was a perfect choice for this animation. This is a very refreshing reprieve from all the crap that gets thrown into the portal, I can really tell that you took your time with this and I gotta say, I'm impressed. This is definatly front page material and should be seen by many people. I can't wait to see what you do with the idea and series. (If you need voice actors, I can do that whole thing ^_^ ). Keep up the good work.
Thanks for your kind words... its reviews like this that really lifts my spirit! :D
And I might take you up on that voice acting offer... although it could be a while until then : \
I gotta say wow. The animations were so fluid and the graphics were very well done. The sound effects were all right on the money. Nice variety or weapons and camera angles. Explosions and smoke effects were awesome. The motion capture and modeling were so realistic and added greatly to the piece. Great job and keep making movies. One thing though, maybe make a story line and dialog and a plot. Violence is good, but violence with a kickin story is better. Keep up the good work.
I'm planing on 6 part series, just gotta work out a good scenario. Intruder was made for pure entertainment. I'm well aware of the importance of the story but at this case i don't concern lack of it as a flaw. Thanks for a great review mate.
I was like...
...whoa, thats my song. URL is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/106287 , song is Ethereal Symphony. Thanks for using my song. Animation shows promise, though in the future I hope for more of a plot, smoother movements, dialog or noises maybe. Anywho, keep making flash, you'll learn as you go.
That was awesome. Ninjas, pirates, Madness, Mortal Kombat, Mario Kart, Pinjas. Just pure awesome. Good animation as always and excellent sound. The humor is also top notch. You blended all the different references and elements in together quite well. Also everyone always wants to know which is better ninjas or pirates and pinjas? BEST ANSWER EVER! I myself love both pirates and ninjas, but when is the last time you saw a ninja with wenches??? Lol, good job and keep up the good work.
If you ask me, cool concept and nice intro. One thing that would help the experience would be a more developed story line and better animation. It was still cool. Keep up the good work.
yeah thanks, the animation was sloppy because well it is just a side thing
Yeah, I laughed my ass off. Kinda silly but still funny, loved it and I loved the movie. The animation was good and the voice you used, HILARIOUS! This kinda reminded me of some of EgoRaptors shorts, but defiantly your own movie. Kaplowa-wow! Keep up the good work.
And you better believe I'm still wearing mine! But yes, awesome flash, movements go with the music, fantastic style that matches the song perfectly. Oh, did I mention? I'M AN EDUCATED FISH! (I'm in a war)
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I remember this game! This is one of my favorites from the classics of video gaming. Excellent use of the sounds from the game in the movie and of course your style is awesome.
(Kami the Avatar)
Huh, I saw this movie forever ago when I first added Fallman to my fav. artists last year. I liked it then and WOW I forgot how messed up it was. Great transitions from normal reality to crazy reality. Nice color use, makes my eyes twitch. Dancing squirrels wooo! Keeps up the good work Fallman!
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