Its nice that you're trying but....
I can tell that you use Grageband (if that is not correct, sorry, but it sounds just like it) and while I love that program you have abused it. I'm not trying to be hurtful or offensive here, but I think you have potential and it would be nice to see you use it. First of all this song peaks way too much, therefore its all distorted. Secondly, there are really no transitions in this song, its just a harsh cobbling together of sort of similar sounding tracks. I like to use these sounds as well when making tracks but they could be used more effectively if placed more strategically and if you try to maintain a consistent rhythm. The abrupt changes in this song really hurt its potential to be a cohesive work. Right now it just sounds like you dragged and dropped pre-made loops into a semi-meaningful order to sort of resemble sounds that kind of demonstrate basic music. Again no offense, but for example, you call this Middle Eastern Thing and say that if you are not of Arabian decent then you won't like this, which is funny because I distinctly hear a NORDIC KEYED FIDDLE 01 loop in there. This loop is from a NORDIC keyed fiddle which is a instrument invented in Italy and the Nordic keyed part means that it is tuned and played in accordance with the Nordic musical areas, being northwestern Europe primarily. So yeah, better luck next time.
-AvatarKami
(Kami the Avatar)