Interesting idea. Nice execution. I <3 cars and this makes me happy. It might be cool to mix different engines together to represent a street race. I could see something like this in a NFS game or a Fast and Furious movie. Anywho, good job. But. Camaro is better. Mine could waste yours ^_^ . teehee!
(Kami the Avatar)
I intend on making another more diverse vehicle track in the future. I like performance... a lot. I'd put up a fight with your Camaro (course... depends on what you got on it...) but, I do like F-body's: Late model Trans Am or Fire-Hawk would be my choice... Thanks for listening.
I have defiantly met many people that this song would be perfect for. Great lyrics and the spoken parts mesh with the guitar and singing nicely. Your singing is also nice. Fortunately, all the girls named Katie that I know are cool and hot. I'm sorry that the Katie you know is a bitch, a slut, ugly, and unattractive. I have to say though, this song is a great way to express your feelings. So keep up the good work....and avoid that katie chick.
...this song! Totally reminds me of driving very fast down the highway at night in my black Camaro (racing?) lol. Great guitar with the electronic beats and heavy synths. One hell of a song filled whit constant build up which is great for keeping it fresh and interesting, and the transitions between sections loses absolutely nothing and preserves the flow of the piece well. Keep up the good work.
Good review, I enjoy the detailed analysis. Glad you enjoyed it, hopefully you don't get speeding tickets too often haha.
...Thanks for abusing Garageband even more. I'm not trying to be mean or abusive here, but.... There is absolutely no flow to this song what so ever. All it sounds like is you dragged a bunch of the loops together and dropped them in a random order. It changes way to much and has no cohesive elements that bring any part of this song together. You really need to work on having a beat/tempo that drives the song. I mean you didn't even tweak any of the loops at all either. Please, learn more about Grageband before you attempt to make any more songs in it.
It was well done for what it was. At certain times the voice seems to repeat to much. Plus, this is from Serenity, which happens to be one of my very most favoritist movies ever! So thanks for this.
(Kami the Avatar)
Its nice that you're trying but....
I can tell that you use Grageband (if that is not correct, sorry, but it sounds just like it) and while I love that program you have abused it. I'm not trying to be hurtful or offensive here, but I think you have potential and it would be nice to see you use it. First of all this song peaks way too much, therefore its all distorted. Secondly, there are really no transitions in this song, its just a harsh cobbling together of sort of similar sounding tracks. I like to use these sounds as well when making tracks but they could be used more effectively if placed more strategically and if you try to maintain a consistent rhythm. The abrupt changes in this song really hurt its potential to be a cohesive work. Right now it just sounds like you dragged and dropped pre-made loops into a semi-meaningful order to sort of resemble sounds that kind of demonstrate basic music. Again no offense, but for example, you call this Middle Eastern Thing and say that if you are not of Arabian decent then you won't like this, which is funny because I distinctly hear a NORDIC KEYED FIDDLE 01 loop in there. This loop is from a NORDIC keyed fiddle which is a instrument invented in Italy and the Nordic keyed part means that it is tuned and played in accordance with the Nordic musical areas, being northwestern Europe primarily. So yeah, better luck next time.
(Kami the Avatar)
pretty cool, fits together rather well for all the random stuff in there and transitions are interesting. Kinda reminds me of Nine Inch Nails at some points.
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